Drawing 1: Assignment 2: Tutor feedback via Meet – 23.8.19

  • Tutor was generally pleased and positive, especially with the scrapbook, which she had had most time to look at
  • Need to become more efficient in referencing research on work, and vice versa – just a note can be enough
  • Consider using a colour wash as a frame or a background, and draw over the top
  • Also consider putting down rough areas of tone and do line drawing over this (as, e.g. in the bark, moss and lichen line drawing)
  • Drawing from unusual angles, as in the house interior drawings, is going well; tutor particularly liked:
    •  the one from the top of the stairs – maybe try again with better foreshortening
    • The sketch in the bedroom with diagonal bed worth also working up, maybe in charcoal?
  • Tutor was interested in the research referencing “meaningful objects” – explore (both research and trying out) a self-portrait made from meaningful objects
  • Also reference to research – the curved staircase – consider a picture which contrasts correct/incorrect perspective
  • The inside/outside contrast, and light, are possible aspects of interest for me to develop
  • Saying I can’t draw fabric! – task to draw a screwed up piece of paper as a start; also using a charcoal background and rubber are helpful with folds and fabric
  • Try more pastels and more charcoal
  • Don’t worry about my “scribbly” style – can be used to create tone – need to find a way to use what I naturally do – embrace what I am! – don’t just focus on meeting the course tick-boxes
  • Think more about the surface I am working on and what it can do and whether I need to adapt it
  • Assignment 2 picture – she had hoped for more on the basis of the work that had gone before (e.g. the reflection in the lamp, which she really liked), and frankly I so had I – we discussed how I fell into the final piece and found myself a bit trapped in it by time constraints –  suggestion was to re-work it in a different medium to give it some zip, possibly considering some asymmetrical cropping
  • Target: I chose “work more expressively” – make the tasks suit me, not me suit the tasks – make my style and materials do what I want them to do. 

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